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Often, I try to kiss you,
my eyes closed,
it seems like a moment away from perfection,
until I open my eyes and realise
it's only the wind I'm kissing.
A lifetime spent alone,
no hand to touch me,
no lips to kiss me,
nothing but dreams and longing..
Every dream I dream,
every tought I think,
it is always you, angel.
Sometimes I feel your arms around my waist,
or your soft hands wiping the tears from my face,
but then I open my eyes and look around,
I realise that nothing changed,
that my dreams stay dreams,
and my life stays sorrow,
and that my mind is just playing games with me.
A lifetime spent alone...
Is that really my destiny ?..
©2008-2009 ~glaci7
:iconglaci7:

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My first poem that I've ever posted anywhere, so have that in mind, it's probably not very good, but.. here it is !

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:iconfrozen-jakalope:
Sounds like how I've been thinking lately <3

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There is in every village a torch - the teacher: and an extinguisher - the clergyman
-Victor Hugo
:iconsilentbloodshed:
i've to agree..itz how i've been thinkin lately too...well done! itz very good :)!

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~||> I suffer in Silence <||~

"I guess it wasn't much of a god if it could be killed by a human being." ~Heather from SH3
:iconglaci7:
Thank you for the comment and the fav :hug:
Hope your negative toughts go away soon and get replaced by some happiness :)

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If you see me, please, just walk on by, walk on by, forget my name and I'll forget it too.
:iconsilentbloodshed:
yeah i hope so too cz that would really be good^^..and np! ur work is nice and the fav was a must!! :D! :boogie:

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~||> I suffer in Silence <||~

"I guess it wasn't much of a god if it could be killed by a human being." ~Heather from SH3
:iconglaci7:
yeeeeh, happyface is always better than the emoface. I should know =D
just keep on smiling, after some time, you'll convince yourself you got a good reason :)

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If you see me, please, just walk on by, walk on by, forget my name and I'll forget it too.
:iconsilentbloodshed:
^^ thnx itz good to know that and im not that emo all the time but thoze dark momentz can be really difficult^^

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~||> I suffer in Silence <||~

"I guess it wasn't much of a god if it could be killed by a human being." ~Heather from SH3
:iconsuvetar:
Tužno....

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Auta luonto, anna voima, tee vereni vahvemmaksi...
:iconglaci7:
Ce'st la vie.. :)

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If you see me, please, just walk on by, walk on by, forget my name and I'll forget it too.
:iconjoooni:
it's beautiful, i recognize the feeling ...

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